[comp.society] Writing as communication

taylor@hplabsc.UUCP (05/16/87)

[this is a continuation of the previous message, but deserves a new
 basenote. -- Dave]

Let me expound a bit on why I like to use the written form. I have found, at
least in personal experience, that as long as I don't put an idea *into
writing* (as opposed to *telling it orally*), it is prone to contain `fuzzy
edges'. While I may have an intuitive understanding of what I want to
express, I am likely to overlook side effects and contradictions simply
*because* I rely on implications and context to convey the idea. The very
process of bringing an idea to paper (or the screen or whatever) involves a
certain *cleaning up* of the concepts involved. The *vocabulary* of the
written word is smaller than that of a conversation (it doesn't include body
language and similar forms of expressions), yet something expressed solely in
written form is much less dependent on volatile context, which forces you to
put the ideas into *explicit* form, to *pin them down*. While this may not be
desirable in matters of art, I find it extremely useful when describing
reality.

In the process of refining a piece of writing, I am in effect trying to make
sure that readers who share a certain minimal context with me will `receive'
as closely as possible the ideas that I a want to `send'. I am eliminating
context dependencies, mainly by inserting explanations or references where
the reader will (probably) not share my context. I will try to read my draft
*from the point of view of a reader* to see whether the impression of the
whole is what I want it to be. (I may also give it to someone else and let
him tell me what he `received'.) To be sure, this is in general more effort
than it would take me to get the ideas across to any particular person in
conversational dialogue. However, for a different person I would have to use
a different dialogue. With a piece of writing (say, an essay), I can hope to
reach, within reason, a whole group of different people and get my idea
across to each of them.

That same process that makes my piece readable for different people will also
provide an `acid test' to the ideas contained in it. When I make an
unwarranted assumption, reading it from the point of view of someone else
(with different asumptions) will leave me unconvinced. If I use faulty logic,
the very process of writing it down will expose it. While I eliminate
unnecessary sidetracks, I am clarifying the scope of my idea, and by
anticipating objections from my readers I will extend my reasoning to its
natural boundaries. Well, at least that's the ideal.

And one more aspect: personal, verbal conversation is by its nature
ephemeral. Once it's over, your memory of it begins to degrade. If I have
produced an adequate piece of writing, it will be able to convey its idea
even after years, and even to me who by then has doubtlessly changed his
point of view...  Sure, I could watch a recording of the discussion that
*produced* the idea, but (see above) this contains lots of redundancies,
false tracks and plain fluff. The paper will contain the *result* of my
efforts to write it, (hopefully) without too much redundancy.

And finally - I LIKE to write. Of course, a lively discussion with an
intelligent and interested partner is wonderful - but how often do you get
it? I can write whenever I have a terminal or a piece of paper around (and
that's *always* for me :-). And when I have completed an idea on paper, I can
always give it to these intelligent and interested people that are supposed
to be out there.

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