[net.sf-lovers] David R. Palmer's EMERGENCE

donn@utah-gr.UUCP (Donn Seeley) (11/08/84)

[This is re-posted from the ARPA sf-lovers list, since net.sf-lovers
seems to be cut off from it.]

EMERGENCE (Bantam, 1984; 291 pp.) is David R. Palmer's first novel, and
it's a humdinger of a science fiction adventure in the best tradition
of Analog and Astounding -- Campbell would have been proud of it.  It's
not surprising, then, that the first two sections were published in
Analog magazine, and they managed to garner a Nebula nomination and two
Hugo nominations...

The book is the diary of one Candy Smith-Foster, 11-year-old prodigy
and irrepressible heroine.  When a Russian first strike kills 99.9% or
more of the population of North America, Candy finds herself and her
obnoxious companion, a bright blue macaw named Terry, alone in a huge
fallout shelter which her foster father has had constructed beneath
their home in Wisconsin.  Normal folks might find this situation a bit
depressing, but fortunately Candy is an absurdly optimistic person and
she and her bird soon emerge to embark on a wild and hairy tour that
takes her back and forth across the continent and eventually into
space...  The action comes in bursts of surprising intensity, and
although this makes the narrative a bit jumpy, you tend not to notice
this while reading because you are much too busy turning pages.  The
style is rather curious and takes some getting used to: it is a very
telegraphic English, which is rationalized as being the result of the
impatience of someone with an IQ of well over 200 trying not to be
bored while writing as fast as possible in shorthand (Pitman shorthand
-- Palmer is a certified shorthand court reporter, according to the
biographical blurb).  The book is funny and exciting by turns, and
always engrossing.

There are some negative things about the book, too, unfortunately.  One
problem is the difficulty that Palmer has in preventing Candy from
backsliding into cuteness; Candy has a good feel for when to drop a
self-deprecating remark, though, so this isn't usually very annoying.
Like another recent first novel which is somewhat similar in feel, Tim
Powers' THE ANUBIS GATES, the plot has a number of gaping holes and
preposterous assumptions that are only evident when you finally read
the last page, wipe your brow and exhale.  (Are the Russians really so
evil that they would attempt to kill every human being on the planet,
then leave behind a doomsday device that would take care of any
inquisitive survivors just in case the first try overlooked someone?
And that's positively straightforward compared to certain other events
which I won't spoil...) Another minor problem with the book is that
once you realize just what kind of book it is, it becomes fairly easy
to predict the plot, although for some reason this doesn't decrease the
suspense any.

Don't expect depth from EMERGENCE, but I can pretty much guarantee that
you'll have fun reading it.  (Go back to your library and re-read
Sturgeon's MORE THAN HUMAN to get the marshmallow feeling out of your
mind...)

Donn Seeley    University of Utah CS Dept    donn@utah-cs.arpa
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