[ont.sf-lovers] "The Earth's Children Series: Valley of Horses", Jean M. Auel

perelgut@utai.UUCP (Stephen Perelgut) (01/13/86)

The Valley of Horses
Jean M. Auel
Bantam Books, 1982   (paperback)

This is the second book in the Earth's Children Series by Jean Auel.
This is my second time through this book, in preparation for reading the
next book in the series, "The Mammoth Hunters".

The first 350 or so pages of the 550 page tome are split between Ayla's
continuing saga in the Valley of Horses and the story of two brothers,
Jondalar and Thonolan, who are undertaking a Journey.  Ayla has been
cursed and is now living on her own.  She still thinks of herself more as
Clan than Other, and in some ways this is more a story of her acceptance of
her heritage and destiny than anything else.

I found myself getting pretty impatient for the two story lines to join.
I remember when I first read this book, I felt pretty much the same way.  But
Auel has adopted a dime-novel romance style and obviously wanted to exploit
it fully.  Substitute a castle turret for the cave and you almost have a
classic gothic romance.  But mixed in are details of life as a human being
30,000 B.C.  

In spite of the rather trashy romantic interludes (our heroine is a tall,
slender, gorgeous blond with large breasts - and she thinks she's ugly;
our hero is a 6'6" tall muscular blond who is repeatedly described as 
irresistably sexy and unbelievably tender and the best lover in at least
3 tribes) I love Ms Auel's imagery.  However, the power of the images makes
the first 350 or so pages disconcerting to read since they alternate between
our hero (oh yeah, he has a large cock and knows how to use it), and our 
heroine.  I found it was best at times to put the book down at the end of 
a chapter and come back to it in a few minutes.  At other times, I couldn't
put it down even though I've read it before.

I found this book very hard to rate.  There are places where it is as good 
as anything I've ever read, and there are places where it is as bad as I
imagine Harlequin romances would be.  There's a good 100-or-so pages
where the lover's are desperately yearing for each other and yet very
depressed over the fact that the other "won't like them."  And these are
people who discover how to use flint and iron to make fire; and how to
make a spear thrower given the concepts of spear and slingshot; and learn
how to talk in a couple of days.

On my scale of -4 to +4, I think I'd rate this a +2.  There are probably
250-300 pages worth of +4, and almost as many that I'd rate -2 or worse.
It's the description of the land and how to survive, and the believability
that earns this book my final rating.  You'll probably enjoy reading it, 
and if you hit a bad spot, just remember there'll be a diamond just beyond
that cesspool.
-- 
Stephen Perelgut    Computer Systems Research Institute, University of Toronto