[net.sf-lovers] Excerpt: "A Little Leaven", by Isaa

mcewan@uiucdcs.CS.UIUC.EDU (10/24/85)

> Well, where should one start? With the simple truth that the great Dr. A
> doesn't know jack about commas, and uses them in the wrong place at the wrong
> time? Or with his smug, egocentric male chauvinism toward his daughter, her
> "lovely co-worker", and his wife, whom he refuses to name?

It's his ex-wife, which may have something to do with his not naming her.

>  How about some-
> thing more substantive - like why in the hell is this vignette included in a
> science history article about the discovery of yeast? What does his con-
> descension toward his beautiful daughter and his resultant foul aspersions
> on her parentage have anything whatsoever to do with anything that any human
> being besides an Asimov worshipper would want to know?

Many people like Asimov's personal pieces better than the science articles
they precede. I have no doubt that ego enters into it, but Asimov is just
providing what a substantial portion of his audience is asking for.

> I mean, "unmistakeable
> Asimovian features" my left hand of darkness! Does anyone you know talk about
> his daughters "Jacksonian features" or "Alberryesque features" or "Rospachian
> features"?

No, but I don't see why they shouldn't.

>  How many people do you know who would refer to their daughters in
> print as "gorgeous women"? How many writers have you ever read that would 
> say "she was asked to play the role, at sight, in her grammar school...",
> and totally forget that there is no such construct as "at sight" (it is
> correctly "at first sight")? 

From the Random House Dictionary:

sight ... 11. at or on sight, immediately upon seeing.

> 
> More questions - how does even the demigod of science fiction, the master of
> prolix spew, get away without having this kind of ridiculous, embarrasing
> drivel of a father slobbering over the fact that he actually raised a daughter
> that ended up looking good and going into some sort of social worker program
> (that he not-so-subtly hints at being amusingly disapproving of) edited out
> of his otherwise good and informative article? Why does he think that anyone
> in his right mind or even his left mind would find what he has to say about
> his daughter, her adorable liberal tendencies and her Aryan makeup, in any
> way germane to his article about yeast, or even to the more global, meta-
> fictional point of essay-writing? 
> 
> I just don't get it. Could somebody clue me in?

Because people keep telling him that they want to read more of this stuff.



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