[net.women] Too Verbose

dyer@vaxuum.DEC (This did not happen to/Pablo Picasso) (08/13/85)

Too Verbose_____________________________________________________________________

> I never thought any woman was ever as effective as a man, even when she's not
> in her period.

	Too verbose.  Let's tighten that baby up a bit:

> I never thought.  Period.

	That conveys the same message with fifteen less words.
	You're welcome.
		<_Jym_>

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