[net.poems] Criticism, comments, and proof of existence...

taylor@sdcsvax.UUCP (Dave Taylor) (06/23/83)

 
This may be silly, but I sure would like to get some feedback from the 
readers of this group on the poems that I have recently submitted
to this group...Help???

	Or, rather;

	"Touch me,
	prove to me that
	I exist.

	I need the comments,
	the feelings,
	the love."

	Perhaps not, though; a bit too melancholy for a cheerful request!

	Nonetheless, please feel more than welcome to send any thoughts,
counter arguments (if what I write is worthy of argument!) or (yes!) praise
to me, as feedback is swell, as long as you aren't standing too close to 
the amplifier!

	With strange things over my ears,
			
		-- Dave Taylor

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ps: the strange things are the headphones of my 'walkman'...some nice
    jazz and a terminal - what else could I ask for??!!!!?!?!?!?!?!